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I didn't think the ending was good enough but I will see what you guys think about it. This is probably going to be one of my longest stories and I probably won't make them this long that often.
I also wanted to say that this is a part 2 to Elizabeth's Day Off, even though it doesn't continue Elizabeth's story. I hope you like it :)
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Posted by Blakesnorf 6 years ago Report
I only noticed this now but, Abigail's lines were supposed to be slanted because I used the word said too much and it didin't look good like that. Abigail's lines aren't actually slanted and I will try to fix that.
Posted by Eclipseneko51 6 years ago Report
I liked this it was really cute and enjoyable and that fourth wall break made me laugh.
great work i look forward to seeing what you do next.
Posted by Blakesnorf 6 years ago Report
Thanks, I Laughed a lot when I first came up with that fourth wall break. The reason I did that was because in Elizabeth's day off, Elizabeth digests her prey but I wanted this story to be non fatal and I couldn't come up with a reason so I just went with that. :P
Posted by Blakesnorf 4 years ago Report
Thanks xD I love it too